My lips may be curved into a smile
My heart pounding so hard that i tremble
The love so innocent and naive
So pure in intent
But deep down in the dark corner
of my brittle heart
I know that it's unreal
like a myth told by the generations...
like an old wife's tale passed down...
like a fairy tale soothing the child to sleep
But deep down in the dark corner
of my brittle heart
I know that it's unreal
like a myth told by the generations...
like an old wife's tale passed down...
like a fairy tale soothing the child to sleep
until she wakes tomorrow to face the cruel world..
...but until then
Just let my smile put a glow in my face
and let my heart pound as hard as it can...
...my first try at poetry (if u could call it that) ..couldn't really help myself...
hope you like it :) ...
hope you like it :) ...
Anonymous | February 2, 2008 at 11:54 AM
hey nice nice...
>>loves it<< :P:P
(love sick poetry) haha
Anonymous | February 3, 2008 at 9:40 AM
well..i hope u enjoy writin...
Inxive Neoy | February 3, 2008 at 10:18 AM
wow nice poem!! its really your own?
Anonymous | February 3, 2008 at 10:39 AM
nice poem..
Aryj | February 3, 2008 at 10:55 AM
thanks u guys!!!
malli: thankuuu n ya, kuda koh lovesik vefa ey huree eyru
lil devil: mm...i dunno whether i enjoyed it...but i liked da end result for sure...sorta..
inxive neoy: yesh its mine...hama aryj original eh :P
thanks everybdy!!!! :D *ufalun folhifa*
Crimson Solace | October 12, 2008 at 7:50 PM
nice poem...though its sad to see that most people these days dont really beleive in love...or something like that....its not an old wives tales you know hehe....but still nice poem