i always thoughti could walk alone
no hands to hold
no guides to follow
no roots to hold me up and bright
no fur to keep me warm and alright
i thought i was fine..just alone
leaving it all and going with the flow
alas,
i now realise...living ain't easy
when it just goes by
and thats how it is..when you ain't nearby
you keep me happy...you make me strong
you lift my spirits..you always sang a different song
and there right there...i saw the fur..the roots the hands..
and the guide to lead away
'cause you remind me...when i forget
and you find me..when i am lost..
the many laughs with others...
compare little with the few i had with you..
you were what i needed...
you were there...
picture from deviantart : True Friendship by kimcats
mushimas | July 18, 2009 at 9:12 AM
who was there? O_O
btw, nice poetry :D
Aryj | July 19, 2009 at 4:35 AM
she/he/it was there :D
and thankuuu (gadhakamun dhamafa genai namaves ) :P
Anonymous | July 20, 2009 at 11:43 AM
Very amazingly awesome =]
This truly touched me..
The flow is amazing, What makes the simple piece of writing so awesome is that the words are so natural. something we all want to say but only a poet could say in the right words. Words straight from the heart.
And I related it to your life, and my eyes have a pair of tear in kaiddha's words x)
dont tell me my relation is wrong coz these tears! are very very scarce! xD
~inern
SELF!SH G!RL | July 20, 2009 at 3:02 PM
Its very meaningful and touchy.. truly nicely expressed!
Anonymous | July 23, 2009 at 12:05 PM
sounds...profound...
besty | July 24, 2009 at 1:09 AM
aah..my poems's got 5 comments :P
nice!!!
Nora | August 10, 2009 at 12:32 AM
very nice :)